Would you change the following sentences? If not, why not? Rewrite those that need clarification.
1. Rubber coated bullets were fired into the crowd by police in riot gear.
Active: Police in riot gear fired rubber coated bullets into the crowd.
2. Later in the day, the employees were informed of the layoffs by the boss himself.
Active: Later in the day, the boss informed the employees of layoffs.
3. With five seconds left, a three-point shot was missed by LeBron James.
Active: LeBron James missed a three-point shot with five seconds left.
4. Participants in the survey were asked about their changes in political affiliation.
Active: The survey asked participants about their changes in political affiliation.
5. Tall buildings and mountain roads were avoided by Raoul because he had such a fear of heights.
Active: Raoul avoided tall buildings and mountain roads because he had such a fear of heights.
6. The bill is being considered by the Legislature.
Active: The Legislature is considering the bill.
7. The tiny island has been destroyed by the earthquake.
Active: An earthquake destroyed the tiny island.
8. The class is reading the book.
This isn't passive
9. An experimental operation was performed at the hospital yesterday.
I wouldn't change this sentence because we don't know anything about who performed the experimental operation.
10. The wheat field was covered by debris from the downed airliner.
Active: The downed airliner covered the wheat field in debris.
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